Feedback
The feedback that I received on my previous elevator pitch was that I needed to show more of my body to the camera and display better posture. I believe that I have done that in this new elevator pitch, however I still only had my laptop to actually take the video with. I also feel that I did better making eye-contact with the camera which was another comment from a fellow student. I also took one of my expert's advice from "Growing Your Social Capital" and talked more about the service than the details of the actual product itself.
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